Evil Mr Jonson

It was a clear Saturday lunchtime and Lucy and Tom were walking to go and have lunch in the nearby pizzeria. They were talking about their new homework assignment that their stricter than strict English teacher, Mr Jonson, had given them.

Suddenly the sky changed to an inky black although it was the middle of the day in the middle of the summer


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  1. wellsprings Said,

    March 17, 2015@ 12:46 pm      Reply

    I really enjoyed your story as it is sinister (evil Mr Jonson) but also suspenseful. Well done to you both – good to see people working together.

    Mr White

  2. Ms. Matteis - Team 100 WC Said,

    March 29, 2015@ 4:29 pm      Reply

    Nadja and Nathan,
    You both did a great job setting the scene with descriptive language. I really like how you describe the sky turning into an inky black. Keep up the good work!


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