…all I could see were two red eyes

I was walking home from school one day. I was late,so I took the short cut through the woods.It was getting dark and bats were roaming the area . I carried on walking …What should happen next ??

( Joshuam )

2 Comments »

  1. michaelac Said,

    November 14, 2012@ 6:20 pm      Reply

    I liked when It was lat and lat you were roaming the area.I thinck you need to make it longer and the tittle shoud be … all i coued see were two red eyes…part 2

  2. Emma Said,

    November 23, 2012@ 2:02 pm      Reply

    Thats a nice story Josh :)


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